A Friendly Clown: 3 Revised Versions

1. Cherrie, Sophia, Gordon

On one little space of my dresser, a funny toy clown sits on a tiny unicycle which I received from my friend last Christmas. The clown's short yellow hair is made of yarn, which covers its ears. The black surrounds the blue eyes make it a lake and slender eyelashes around it act as trees. Cherry-red cheeks, nose, lips and a sweet smile constructed the clown's face. He wears red and blue costume with a white scarf covering its neck. The light blue on the left side and the red on right side, which forms a line separates the whole costume in to two, makes it more vivid. The white spokes on the wheel of the unicycle sit in the center and spread to the black tire so that the wheel transfers to the inner half of a grapefruit. Looking at the clown gives me a visual pleasant. The smiling clown reminds me of the rainbow, as the best gift I received from my friend which I like the most.



2. Zen, Leo, Nina

On the right side of my dresser, a waggish toy clown is lying on atiny unicycle – I received this gift last Christmas from a close friend. The clown's short yellow yarn hair covers its ears. Around the blue eyes, are the cute dark eyelashes. Under the cherry-red cheeks, nose, and lips, is a joyful smile. A fancy white necklace is hanging on its neck. The clown also dress a red and blue costume. The left side of the outfit has a color of light blue, and the right side is color red. The light blue left side and the red right side of the outfit make a obvious contract. The two colors form a line that separates the toy clown. The white spokes on the wheel of the unicycle are in the center andgo to the black tire so that the wheel sort of looks like the inner half of a grapefruit. In the center of the unicycle, the white spokes on the wheel attach to the black tire that makes the wheel similar to the inner half of a grapefruit.  I enjoy looking at the clown. Every time Ienter to my room, the colorful figure would smile at me, and it reminds of my best friend. How friendly my toy clown is!

3. Sera, Amanda, Nancy

Located on the top of my dresser, is a unique toy clown on a tiny unicycle -- I received this gift last Christmas from a close friend. The clown's short yellow hair made of yarn overlays its ears. The little dark eyelashes lightened the beauty of the blue eyes. The toy was composed of cherry-red cheeks, nose, and lips, and a delightful smile. It carries an exquisite white necklace on its neck. The clown is also dressed in a red and blue costume. The left side of the outfit looks light blue, and the right side seems red. The two colors mix into a line that meets down the center of the toy. The white spokes on the wheel of the unicycle lie near inside the center and follow the black tire so that the wheel gives an impression of the inner half of a grapefruit. I enjoy looking at the clown. This colorful toy which smiles at me whenever I enter my room is the best gift I've ever received from my special friend. I love it as my favorite treasure.